The way you’ve highlighted the striking imagery and the palpable conflict truly captures the essence of the piece. I love how you’ve noted the fragmented structure and unconventional capitalization—they really do intensify the emotional depth and unsettling tone. It’s a perfect reflection of the turmoil portrayed.
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